Шатакатраям 1.6 Śatakatraya 1.6 — 2 переводов

Сравнение русских переводов «Шатакатраи» Бхартрихари — стих за стихом.

Переводы

Серебряков 1979

shatakatrayam-serebryakov
6 vyālaṃ bālamṛṇālatantubhirasau roddhuṃ samujjṛmbhate
chettuṃ vajramaṇiṃ śirīṣakusumaprāntena saṃnahyati |
mādhuryaṃ madhubindunā racayituṃ kṣārāmbudherīhate
netuṃ vāñchati yaḥ khalānpathi satāṃ sūktaiḥ sudhāsyandibhiḥ || 6 ||

Леонов 2020

shatakatrayam
6 vyālaṃ bālamṛṇālatantubhirasau roddhuṃ samujjṛmbhate
chettuṃ vajramaṇiṃ śirīṣakusumaprāntena saṃnahyati |
mādhuryaṃ madhubindunā racayituṃ kṣārāmbudherīhate
netuṃ vāñchati yaḥ khalānpathi satāṃ sūktaiḥ sudhāsyandibhiḥ || 6 ||